400 People Served. Now Tell Me the Story.

Your organization impacted 400 people last month. So what?

I know, I know! That’s a chunk of people! 

Hear me out, I’m not taking that away from you. You are doing great work!

But if you truly want your donors to understand how their dollars are making a difference, give them tangible results. 

Tell them a story.

Storytelling is one of the most powerful tools to engage donors. 

The key is to ensure you are sharing stories with integrity and in an ethical way.


Ethical Storytelling Matters

We are telling stories about humans. Sometimes those humans have lived through extreme challenges and hardships. What we must keep in mind is that they are not their circumstances. 

We have a responsibility to protect their dignity and privacy in telling their stories.  

Ethical storytelling should:

  • Build trust with clients, families, and supporters.

  • Preserve dignity by portraying people as whole individuals, not as their challenges.

  • Create authentic donor connections rooted in understanding rather than pity.

  • Empower participants by celebrating their growth, resilience, and achievements.

  • Protect relationships by ensuring people feel honored, not exploited.

Stories that rely on shock, pity, or exaggerated hardship can undermine trust and reinforce harmful stereotypes.  Ethical storytelling asks us to shift the focus from "Look how bad things were" to "Look what's possible when people have support, opportunity, and resources."

Rather than asking donors to feel pity, invite them to become part of someone's journey.


A Simple Gut Check

Before publishing any story, ask yourself:

Do I have express permission from the subject to share his/her story?

Would I feel comfortable reading this story aloud if that person or their loved ones were sitting beside me?

If the answer is no, it's worth revisiting, reworking, or taking a different approach.


There Are More Stories Than You Think

You don’t have to rely on client stories alone. Impact can be shared through a variety of lenses.

Consider highlighting:

The Process

Pull back the curtain on how the work happens.

Donors are often fascinated by the effort, expertise, and care that go into delivering your services. Take them through a day in the life, a program experience, or the steps required to create meaningful outcomes.


The People

Showcase the staff, volunteers, and community members who make the mission possible.

These individuals often witness transformation firsthand and can provide powerful insights into the impact of your work.

The Perspectives

Impact doesn't stop with the person receiving services.

Family members, caregivers, mentors, and community partners often have unique perspectives on the changes your organization helps create.

The Program Itself

Every organization has unique elements that make its work special.

Whether it's a therapeutic environment, a specialized approach, a beloved tradition, or a tool that helps facilitate growth, these stories can help donors better understand what makes your mission effective.


Beyond the Numbers

Celebrate and be proud of the 400 people.

But don't stop there.

Tell donors about the process.

Tell them about the people.

Tell them about the moments of growth.

Tell them about what changed because your organization exists.

Because donors are unlikely to remember the statistics.

But they'll remember the story behind it.

Shauna VanderLinden

Content Strategist

Shauna’s expertise lies in using creativity and storytelling to connect donors to organizations that embody their passions. Over her 25-year career, her diverse background covers the non-profit and public sector in highly visible roles within the community.

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